Here are some good, thorough update emails if this is more your style:
Subject: Update: Spinning Wisdom
Friends and Family,
I'm writing to thank you for your incredible support of my fundraising campaign with
At the Crossroads. Your messages back are inspiring and encourage me to get my a** out of bed to that d*** spin class at 6:30 on Monday mornings.
I only have $25 more to go to reach my fundraising goal for ATC. In the last four weeks, I've learned a lesson or two from spinning about the value of incentives (like cookie dough Balance Bars after class!) So, in an effort to inspire more of you to contribute to my campaign, here are a few reasons to donate to me and help ATC:
1. My birthday is in less than a month. If you contribute to my campaign, I will consider it a birthday present from you. I'm a hard person to shop for, so this is an easy present.
2. I'm a nice person when I exercise. I'm a grouchy person when I don't exercise. Your support of my spinning campaign means that I'll be more pleasant when we hang out!
3. You can see exactly what your money will support at ATC. For instance, if you give $10, you support two meals for ATC's clients. In other fundraisers, you don't really get to see where your money goes or how it is used. Check out my fundraiser page to see exactly what you will support:
http://atthecrossroads.org/campaign/abigailnathanson
Also, it's exciting to see that our revered ATC leader, Rob Gitin, made it into the chronicle yesterday, check it out:
http://www.sfgate.com/cgi-bin/article.cgi?f=/c/a/2009/02/17/DDK715RIMU.DTL
Thank you again for your support of me and ATC!
Abs
Subject: In only 3 short days…
In only 3 short days……22 people have donated a total of $3,245!
That is so unbelievable!!
What does that $3245 means?
For At The Crossroads,
$3245 will provide either 3 years of intensive services or 433 meals for a homeless client or 649 food boxes or 4992 pairs of socks!
For the comedor,
$3245 will feed over 100 kids for almost 2 months or buy every child 2 pairs of shoes!
If you haven't checked it out:
Help me support homeless youth in San Francisco and impoverished children in Argentina at the same time!
• You can find details on the website: http://atthecrossroads.org/campaign/juliebarro
• Or on facebook :) http://www.facebook.com/home.php#/group.php?gid=65108806071&ref=mf
Thank you thank you thank you!!
All my best!
Julie